Beauty at the lake
Trees enshrouded with (light) fog
A dance of two gulls
(edit had to add "light" to make 7th syllable)..
Just practicing haiku.
Five syllables first line
seven syllables second line
five syllables third line
Will practice when I post a photo.
Trees enshrouded with (light) fog
A dance of two gulls
(edit had to add "light" to make 7th syllable)..
Just practicing haiku.
Five syllables first line
seven syllables second line
five syllables third line
Will practice when I post a photo.
8 comments:
This is a beautiful photo and the haiku is perfect because it does look like a dance going on!
thanks laura - i visit other blogs where people do haiku and I find it not easy for some reason. So i'm practicing.
I've never tried it. Maybe I will try.
Nice shot, Sandy!
Toda una belleza de imagen de naturaleza
Saludos
Thank you all.
Laura - hope you try it. I find it kind of difficult.
a stunning photo
and you do not need practice,
you are doing fine
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